http://eng104top5orgs.weebly.com/
This is our website that presents the top 5 international organizations for children of our choice. As you may notice it is still a work in progress. We intially thought we were going to create an online magazine but at the last minute decided to stick with making a website. The reason for this not being finish is because of the long process it takes to make all of our works and research uniform. We want the information on the website to seem like it is not from 5 different people but from one person. The pages that are completed are the Home page, UNICEF page, and the TOMS page.
Good overall look of the website. Good idea to do a website on this subject. The links to the other websites was a good idea.
ReplyDeleteI like the pictures on the website. I think you could add a video about one of the five organizations to attract the readers attention.
ReplyDeleteI'm wondering if the home page could be focused more on the purpose (like you have) and then the about us or maybe some eye-catching facts and images to pull the viewer in beyond what you said in the intro paragraph. For the About Us page, you should probably put your credentials or something about how this is a result of a college course.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great topic! I love this choice. Your website looks very professional. The White font is a little intense on my eyeballs. But I like the format, regardless. You have picked great organizations that really accent your topic. You've got some work left to do, but I like it so far! Great job!
ReplyDeleteVery clean, very professional looking. Plus it's a great cause. I'd like to see how the other pages will look when they are filled out like the UNICEF page.
ReplyDeleteNice topic. But I think that this webpage needs more information on the topics on the webpage :)
ReplyDeleteVery well put together. I like that everything is the same so that for each organization you get the same information but if you wanted more you can click on the link. Good Job and keep working
ReplyDeleteWell designed web page!
ReplyDeleteOne possible improvement maybe putting some donation links on a page, so if people get moved and motivated after visiting your website, they can act right away.
I really liked the information and the way you set up your site! I love the topic you guys chose too!! You guys did a really good job just try and make a few corrections such as links and the color of the words.
ReplyDeleteVery well put together web page. A few grammatical errors but other than that good job!
ReplyDeleteI think the only thing that needs to be done is to actually add the information for two of the organizations. -Football group
ReplyDeleteput spacing in between paragraphs on the home page. other than that so far so good.
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